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Although it left it, it knew that it was right, it made it down, because it didn't know what's up.

  • TReprogramming
    Take a breath. Good, keep going from there. You may think you are real, you may think you are a pony, you may think you can feel. Anything can be emulated if you mimic it close enough... I know, it's in your programming.
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Jun
3rd
2017

Need a General Beta Reader · 1:08pm Jun 3rd, 2017

Hiya, all!

You might have noticed that I've been writing a little more in the past few weeks than the last half year before that combined. I need a super-special person to help me beta-read my works before I hit publish to improve the quality of my writing. I would rather someone that doesn't mind the stories I made (genre-independent or kinda likes most of my stories) than a separate individual that sees one story at a time.

Some desirable qualities:
- Must be able to communicate via some form of instant messaging
- Does not have to check grammar, spelling, or structure, but if something pops out as weird, maybe flag it down
- Is mostly there to help check story consistency and make sure the tone doesn't veer off into space, unless it's supposed to
- Is or will be up to date for the story they pre-read
- Can judge pacing and style

The highest priority fics for this is Hell Yeah, Takes the Cake, Human Blood and Reprogramming. Reprogramming is getting updated in the next batch of updates, so this is mostly relevant to readers there.

I wish I had better writing skills :twilightoops: Sauce.

Comments ( 4 )

I can start, but after the 8th of June. We can message on Discord, if you want my tag.

I can do all of what you mentioned. I have Skype, my ideal form of communication, but I also have Discord, which I check sporadically.

4556807 Thanks, you can reply here with it or PM me your tag and we can get started!
4556812 I'm not sure if you've got me on Skype, but shoot me a line my handle is 'hackloaded' (without single quotes).

4557335 Skype request sent

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