Writing question · 8:20pm May 16th, 2017
About Camping, tingles before bed. random, but what'd you think about the perspective of the young mare in the story?
Pretty good, needs work?
Was I pretty accurate with the female experience and was it believable?
Can I get a real and honest review or two about this story?
I really really enjoyed it, it was a lot of fun! I think you did a good job of making it empathetic and cute.
I don't know that looking for accuracy is the best idea here, given the kind of content it is. Getting a valid opinion on that would kind of, uh, require someone who probably shouldn't be reading the story to read the story.
(really sorry about being the worst on commenting on the other thing, I'm procrastinating on a ton of stuff and it's kind of locking me down motivation-wise)