Help?

I need help with this big block that's been preventing me from progressing with my "Not Wonderbolts Material After All" story. Is there anyone who can lend a hand?

Comments

[DaveMan1000]

Is it a case of "Know what to write, but can't get it down into words", or "Don't know what to follow up with at all"?

I don't know how much this will help, but whenever I'm at a road block with something, I find that taking a nice walk while listening to music helps me clear my head of any distractions and allows ideas to flow easier.

I haven't used this for writing stories myself, but it helped me a lot back in school and college.

Hope this was helpful, I'm loving this story. Why isn't there more HISHE fics for Newbie Dash?

[Autismo555]

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It's a case of "Don't know what to follow up with at all".

There's one chapter in one of the What If? fic series, and I have been taking a break from it by writing another fic.

[Nodqfan]

Maybe you could rewatch the episode and that may give you some ideas for the story.

[Autismo555]

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I can't do that. That's like eating a piece of gum someone else chewed.

Besides, it's painful enough reading the transcript alone.

[DaveMan1000]

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Right. So how about this:

While Twilight talks with Spitfire about the whole thing; Rainbow Dash, after a slow meal courtesy of Applejack and Pinkie Pie, tries to forget about the Wonderbolts by doing a few odd tasks around Ponyville with the others.

But no matter how hard she tries, she just can't get them out of her mind and the thought of messing up one thing and being ridiculed for it again starts to affect her more and more. After another violent outburst, she realises that the only way to get past this difficult time, is to confront the Wonderbolts head on and sort it out herself.

I never pressure writers to get a story done prematurely, so take as much time as you need.

Again, I hope this was helpful in some way.

[Nodqfan]

4510072 I see sorry for suggesting that, so my new suggestion is how about writing down any ideas you have in a Notepad text file?

[HunterBrony101]

What's the problem?

[Lex_Drago]

Well, you can start from the point that all this traditions of this 'Wonder'bolts is the sole reason that Lighting Dust and Wind Rider not the exceptions but the true faces of this 'greatest flight team' .

Seriously, harassment and lack of respect to their own teammates is the core of this group. Will they comply orders of leader who they don't respect?

Because "You need two thing to fly with other ponies in a group. Trust, and respect. None of you guys trust me, and I sure as hay don’t respect any of you anymore." (Fic 'Meeting your heroes').

It's will be interesting to see that Rainbow find in herself strength to leave another day while Wonderbolts tear themselves apart.

Did you read story "Cold streets of Baltimare"? It's a good example of an idea that 'there is mistakes that you couldn't atone'.

Sorry for bad English.