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Phaoray


Editor of several Trixie writers while doing his own stories when possible. Fun Times. Tips are appreciated, but no pressure.

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  • 176 weeks
    Really should pay more attention sometimes.

    https://www.equestriadaily.com/2019/10/40-of-best-trixie-fanfics-for-trixie-day.html

    I am sporadic at looking at Equestria Daily. I regret never knowing this happened, or that I was on it. :twilightblush:

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  • 184 weeks
    Stupid Thought.

    Cozy Glow was sending letters to Tartarus...how did anyone not notice that!? How did no pony read over the letter before hand to make sure it was okay for some twelve year old to be sending letters to Tirek in the first place? How did she get the address to Tartarus!? Why does it even have a address you can look up!? :twilightangry2:

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  • 235 weeks
    Still up there?

    I am quite surprised, Horror Flick is still on the main page four days later and on a Saturday to boot. It is now dropping and being beaten by a story involving a, and I quote from the description 'Big Tiddy Goth Babe'.

    I am okay with this.

    Just wanted to thank everyone who read and enjoyed it. Been awhile since I did more than editing and happy to see my work is still well liked.

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  • 343 weeks
    About 1/2 way done now.

    Just a small update on my existence for those wondering. Still here, but I kind of got caught up in things with real life and also lost the interest to write for a bit, which is annoying because I was ecstatic at all the new follows Complex Apartments brought in. :pinkiehappy:

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  • 347 weeks
    Movie Time Approaches!

    Huzzah! Finally! After months of avoiding Derpiboroo spoilers and ignoring trailers and every spoiler plausible on Equestria Daily the time is approaching! Tomorrow I shall see this movie and be able to stop worrying about having the movie ruined.

    What I know so far:

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Feb
21st
2017

Ugh, been too long. · 2:38am Feb 21st, 2017

But, the add on to Gryphon Empire is complete. Hopefully the final scene explains a bit more and leads to a little more resolution to those who were unhappy with it.

More will be explained in the eventual sequel, but, for now, I need to work on the sequel to hopes and Follies. I'll working on editing and fixing up what I need to in the original once I am done with the first chapter, as going back and editing or adding onto my old stories seems to drain me faster than writing something new, and I need a break from it. :twilightsheepish:

Will get two chapters of the sequel done, then it's on to the next Mauxie fic. Hopefully mid to late this year I can work on the Empire sequel, but we'll see.

Also poking at a writer for a commission for a Trixdagio...however you wanna say that pairing. Since it would probably be awhile till I have the time to do it myself, figured I'd look at subcontracting for the fun of it. :pinkiecrazy:

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Hooray! I just read the ending of the last chapter and I feel much better about how the story concluded. The tone seems less bleak and there is enough of a peek into the next story to make it tantalizing. Admittedly, the king was a little expositiony but it helped smooth the edge of the plot to make way for the next part. I really feel now that there is room for a sequel.

Gryphon Empire may have ended with a cliffhanger, but by giving a glimpse of the next big drama point it feels like something new can be focused on even if all the drama from this installment still hadn't wrapped up.

It looks like you have a great line up for the year. I'm really looking forward to it! Good luck with finding a good author for a Trixidagio story. I know I'd read it. :twilightsmile:

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Admittedly, the king was a little expositiony but it helped smooth the edge of the plot to make way for the next part. I really feel now that there is room for a sequel.

Yeah, it couldn't really be helped sadly. I hadn't expected to show anything of the king's real motivations until the sequel, else I would have had an earlier scene in a earlier chapter to break up some of the exposition.

At least one arc is complete; Does Trixie make it to the king? Yes. :pinkiehappy:

Gryphon Empire may have ended with a cliffhanger, but by giving a glimpse of the next big drama point it feels like something new can be focused on even if all the drama from this installment still hadn't wrapped up.

While it'll be awhile, the first few chapters of the next one should quickly answer most of the unanswered questions. The next one is going to be a lot less grim or dark, especially coming from the story it is inspired by.

Good luck with finding a good author for a Trixidagio story. I know I'd read it.

Author is found, he just has been having some issues lately and needs to go over what I sent him on it. If he can't do it with the outline I sent then I'll just wind up putting it on my own back burner for the future since it is a story I have semi thought of writing off and on if I only could find the motivation to write more :facehoof:

Hey, Trixdagio, huh? Well, If you would write a fiction about Trixdagio, I maybe could draw it, though I'm not sure :D. But it would be awesome.

You know, if you're still in the planning stage for Hopes and Follies' sequel, it'd be a decent plot twist for Shining Armor to suddenly appear in a chapter and be an alicorn. Luna's work on a late wedding present for Cadance and Shining Armor now that she remembers the alicorn seed exists :raritystarry:

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