This is going to take a while since I've hardly finished planning the first few scenes in script form. But I have characters and a story so can't be too hard right... Right?
Could someone read through it and tell me what they think? It's rated M due to intense violence later on in the story so make sure view mature is on if you decide to take a look.
welp
4426206 it's a crossover between one of ny original stories and mlp... I have fire extinguishers so you ned not worry.
4426214 kewl
4426215 it makesme look a little like a weeb atm but thats what the gun is for right?
4426222 ech
4426234 kinda fixed it but now the character sounds like anime badass x terminator... She speaks like a machine. Lel.