I need a beat-reader or editor

I need someone who can edit my fanfiction: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9210451/1/Rogue-Crew

I need someone who can used really good at spotting errors and correct them. But also making telling me about what the think about and make suggests how it can better. You don’t need to know all characters or what story they from but it is a huge help and I would you at less know one of these people are.

If you want to do just go to my message and show what you writ and I think about letting become one of my editor.