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Sep
23rd
2012
Renew's Setting · 2:38am Sep 23rd, 2012
I have an idea that I'd like some feedback on. It's obviously for Renew but I'd like to expand the story to more than what it is. What it is is the setting. Should the story go to different locations (like Manehattan again, Applewood, Trottingham, Cloudsdale, etc.) or even exotic places (like to the Griffin country or Zebra country) or just stay where it is? Apple Sweet and Bookworm WILL indeed follow them as they are too determined to get rid of Discord.
Maybe I should even start a whole new story (continuing from Renew of course) for all of this. What do you ponies think of it?
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lorettafox · 372 views
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You know, that's actually not that bad of an idea. How about this: after Discord and Twilight have their "official" wedding, Apple Sweet and Bookworm burst in to the reception. After some epic fight or something, Discord, Twilight, and Screwball go on the run. Then take it from there. I'm not expecting this to be what actually happens in the story, but how do you like the idea?
376555I do like it but there is one problem, Celestia has the wedding on hold atm BECAUSE of Apple Sweet and Bookworm. Perhaps at the Rose Festival, they both manage to get arrested but end up breaking out of jail?
EDIT: And now I'm liking the idea. Chapter writing time!
376564 *clop clop clop (as in the sound of hooves clapping together)* BRILLIANT!!!
376573 Of course you like it.
376575 You can expect this dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
376579 Now if you'll excuse me, I have a chapter to type.
the zebra country
376600 Perhaps.
i mean why stay couped up in equestria branch out try something wild
376612 True. They could definitely go traveling if they are being forced to go on the run. (Again.)
I SAY GO TO ALL THE PLACES.
''ill take you around equestria,and other places too''
''equestria covers pretty much everything''