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  • 607 weeks
    Apologies to my Readers

    I must really apologize that my sixth installment of Committed! has been a no-show for so long. Things for me have been quite chaotic behind the scenes, including being sick off and on for the past two weeks. But things are improving, so that I can focus on writing for all you wonderful ponies once more. I assure you that the sixth installment is not far off, as I have completed half of

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  • 610 weeks
    Episode One Edit: Complete!

    I feel so accomplished today! At last, I finished editing my first chapter so that it can match the rest of the story's epicness! As I went through the unedited version, I felt kind of sick to my stomach. I realized that THIS was the reason my story isn't getting many views, favorites, or comments. The first chapter as it was, in my opinion, literally crappy, and I apologize for such crappy

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  • 610 weeks
    Major Edit for the Pilot

    I recently started going through my first chapter in order to make it past tense like the rest of my story. Plus there are so many mistakes, and it's rather embarrassing that I missed so many! But I'm sprucing it up quite a bit for first-time readers. Even if you've been following Committed! from the beginning, then you're more than welcome to take a look at its improvements!

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  • 610 weeks
    Chapter Update!

    Oh, joy! I've finally completed my fourth iteration... it only took me about three million weeks to do it...

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  • 611 weeks
    About Darn Time...

    I apologize for the delay in the fourth iteration of Committed!. I guess I was more ambitious than I could handle, as I planned for it to be about 11,000 words. However, I realized that editing that would take absolutely forever. So I pulled a Halo 2 and made it a two-parter. Don't worry, Part 2 will be released soon, but it still needs quite a bit of editing. At first I did want to make

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Sep
22nd
2012

Chapter Update! · 4:18am Sep 22nd, 2012

Oh, joy! I've finally completed my fourth iteration... it only took me about three million weeks to do it...
Anyhoo, I wanted to let you guys know that the next six chapters will be part of what I call the "Dramatis Personæ" story. As most of you might know, it means "Parts of the Play" in English, so I'm sure you can guess what this arc will be focused on. Without giving spoilers, I plan for the end of the arc to take quite a dark/sad turn as Canvas and Nyvena become more involved with The Triumvirate. After that, the story will be more focus on the point of view of the Triumvirate mambers who play a key role in the story. So that's all I can say without spoiling things too much. On a side note, I haven't really planned out how many chapters the story will be., exactly. I was thinking anywhere from 15-20 Episodes at the most. But I'm getting ahead of myself and thinking out loud, as usual.
Anyway, let me know what you think. I'm always open to suggestions on how to make this story one of the finest on this site. Thank you all for your readership and intellectual contributions!

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