I'm man enough to admit my mistakes. · 9:05am Nov 27th, 2016
Hey, guys, after finally getting some decent sleep, I went back and reread my previous chapter, and I got to say that I understand why you guys were not happy about it. It wasn't that I didn't foreshadow or anything, its just that it really matched my current mindset too well. On top of that, there were a few things that I wanted to touch on that I never did, because of my scatterbrained, sleep-deprived state.
So, I've been busy rewriting that chapter as two new ones. I'll be posting it soon, I just thought my usual grammar conscious readers would like a crack at it before I post it. Still doing some edits, though, but I'll be posting both chapters within the next two hours. The second one will have the author's notes at the beginning, to redirect people back to the previous chapter if they haven't been following my blog.
Thank you guys for your support, and for letting me know when I make mistakes! You guys rock!
....i completely missed the update after he got hit by all the spells...
anyway, it seems good to me.
....also, does Skitters favorite disguise form have a brown mane by any chance?
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Good to hear that you finally got some proper sleep. I know all too well how bad lack of sleep can be, mostly due to very bad sleeping habits.
I look forward to reading more of the story, but I think I'll let those with more skills in the area to proof-read. I'm very well aware that if I ever write a story, I will need a very good and patient editor to help me.
I'm not sure what you changed, other than the cliffhanger, but the part that bothered me was humans being the long lost ______ of both the Quzin and the changelings.
4319028 Did you reread the first chapter on the list?
Nothing like sleep deprivation to kill your ability to write.