Editing...

I just got the second chapter of Crystal Butterflies edited by BrainLapse, my favorite literary critique. In a nutshell:

How I feel about my writing while doing it:

How I feel about my writing after BrainLapse tells me what I did wrong:

Thank you, BrainLapse, for not letting me become quite possibly the most arrogant writer ever (although the fact that I think someone will actually read this is grounds to say that you failed).

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[NovaForce2157]

Seriously, though. I love him; he's great.