No?
Well that is because it hasn't updated since chapter 5...and my attempts at having it edited too sadly.
The irony is I have chapter 6 and 7 waiting in the wings. They have been sitting there for years unshared with the public. Knowing me they are not "Top Notch"So here is a snippit for a new story...Would you read it? · 2:30am Oct 31st, 2016
The sky darkened as the world trembled. Voices and screams sounding distant and muted as the dazed mare tried desperately to regain her footing. She was badly bruised, scratched and bleeding from a wound on her head. Looking around her she realized she had fared far better than some of the other innocents, lying motionless upon the ground. Her magenta eyes straining to keep focus when she knew she may have suffered a concussion.
She had to do something, but what? This world was falling apart rapidly, and yet none had an answer as to why or who could have done this. Fields burned, rivers and lakes dried up, the skies spewed ash and brimstone, the grounds themselves began to split and rupture. All over the course of a month. The princesses had no answers, the scholars, even egghead Twilight had no ideas as to the state of Equestria. Now ponyville was exploding and collapsing around her and she couldn't stop it. She didn't even know where any of the others were.
"Dammit, what's going on?" she said through a painful grimace.
"Oh did I miss a pony?" A deep and sinister voice came from behind her.
Gimme any input you can provide...
Sound like a good story.
) did to a xeno town a couple weeks ago, hmmm wouldn't surprise me if this story was that (swap some tau for ponies and inquisitors for whoever our bad guy is, wouldn't be that different it seems)
Feels very close what me and my inquisitorial group (dark heresy RPG
I think I would read this.