"failed moderation" + me on PonySquare

So once again, one of my stories has failed moderation. For those of you who read about the Fluttershy sad/tragic story I posted about last time (which by the way, now has the official title of The Last Vestiges of Night), I submitted it, but it didn't pass moderation because I forgot to mark it as not being "Everyone" due to it being a story about death.

This is what I have to say to that:

Anyways, I resubmitted it under the proper rating, so hopefully it won't take forever to get approved and get put up on the site. This is the second bucking time that one of my tard moments has caused a story of mine to fail moderation... >.<

EDIT: You can still view it by going to my profile and heading down south to my stories list. So tell me what you think! In fact here, I'll even link you to it:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/51895/The-Last-Vestiges-of-Night

EDIT x2: I'm now on PonySquare! Come find me! (Or you can just go here.)

Comments

[Strumfreak]

I read it, felt bad for Fluttershy, but it was definately a good story. I thought it needed a little more explenation before I read the ending, everything made more sense afterwards though. Just please don't make a story like this about Pinkie directly being the one in that situation, or I will cry and I wonder if the admin know people can still read stories before they are approved. I read Warm and Fuzzy before it was approved, so I don't know it must be a glitch or something like that

[CanterlotGuardian]

367758
oh no, that is the only one I'm doing along that line. interestingly enough, though, I almost changed it halfway through the writing of the story to make it about Pinkie Pie instead of Fluttershy, but I eventually decided to keep it as being about Fluttershy. as for the glitch, I genuinely don't know. though now that you said "glitch," the only thing I can think about is this:

rplib.files.wordpress.com/2010/07/lilo_and_stitch2.jpg

[Strumfreak]

367774 I loved that movie when I was little I think, I liked number 2 more though I wouldn't complain about the glitch though, gives people a moment to view a story before it might be turned down. I just want the admin to stop letting the horrible Mary Sue/Gary Stu stories in. you should scroll down the recent stories and find one called Crocopocalypse i think it is... I've never had to post so many bad pictures without reading the story first My new story should be up soon too as for sad Pinkie Pie stories.... Well lets just say something like Cheerliee's Garden-Scarlet harvest: part 2 Bucking Broke Me!

[CanterlotGuardian]

367799
funny you should mention Cryopocalypse, I actually just shredded reviewed both chapters.

[Strumfreak]

367810 I didn't see your comment I read the description and looked at the like/dislike ratio, And scrolled STRAIGHT to the bottom No mercy on those stories... Oh I see, Zoidberg comment dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Pinkie_loool.png

[CanterlotGuardian]

367828
teehee yep that was me.

[Strumfreak]

367830 Oh wow. someone replied to my comment but i cant see it... the author set a password on his story... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png

[CanterlotGuardian]

367847
that's what happens when it gets added to multiple bad-fic review groups and everyone starts flaming it to a well-done crisp.

[Strumfreak]

367854 Haha I have no idea how I would have reacted had everyone done that to my first fic. I'd probobly be in the corner dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy.png

[CanterlotGuardian]

367863
I probably would be, too. Luckily, it seems as though quite a few people liked your story.

[Strumfreak]

367865 Meh, Warzone wasn't very good. I'll try and grow my writing skills more before i return to it. Slendermane was my lucky start. I was extremely happy with the attention that got. I have a very big secret i'm keeping until late Slendermane: Requiem that hopefully everyone that reads the 2 stories will find... rather shocking. After that, Alan Man, have you ever heard of a wonderful little game called Alan Wake?

[CanterlotGuardian]

367873
of course. it's one of my favorite games. I assume there will be at least one reference to Poets of the Fall in your story (maybe do an equestrian variant, Ponies of the Fall)

[Strumfreak]

367879 YOU ARE AWESOME! and yes, there was going to a massive emphasis on the Poets of the Fall, but that sounds like a brilliant idea! I may ask of some opinions of you later when I begin writing then, because it would be great to get some outside opinion from someone else who loves the game.

[CanterlotGuardian]

367883
ask whenever and whatever you'd like. I'm always down to help out a fellow FiM fiction writer

[Strumfreak]

367889 Thanks That'd be a massive help

[CanterlotGuardian]

367940
you got it.