To Glimpse a Wider World Update. · 8:57pm Sep 17th, 2012
Chapter four will take a little while to be released. Despite the fact that college is now back in full swing, I've still been spending free time on the story. The time that's being spent, though, is going towards reworking the first three chapters. Cheezesauce, a fellow member of SALT, has been working with me on the story. There'll be a lot of small changes, but a few bigger ones. One of the more notable things is that I'll be cutting back on the accents (mostly with chapter one's hobo OC, and to a lesser extent with Apple Bloom). The most notable thing — and this might call for a bit of a re-read after the changes have been made — is that I'll be reworking the chapter introductions so that the mane six's part of the story is of comparable importance to the CMC's (i.e. there will be narration now). Just thought I'd let you folks know. Expect chapter four within a week from today, at which point the changes to chapters 1–3 will have already been made.