Need Help For Next Chapter of A Change In Scenery · 5:31pm Oct 8th, 2016
I need help with the concepts for the next chapter of A Change in Scenery.
Major Spoilers for next chapter:
So I have it planned that they head to the Cloudsdale Colosseum for the Wonderbolts show and see Luna. But, my biggest issue is that I've been told several things. I was told that there should be an element of fear with the encounter, as in the main character is scared of Luna and tries to escape. Alternatively though, I've been told by another person that there should not be an aspect of fear at all when they meet Luna.
I truly don't know which way the story should go in that aspect. I already have the concepts thought up, but I just need to know what the majority of people think when they expect an encounter with Luna.
Please comment and let me know so that I can publish the next chapter as soon as possible.
4246377 I was told different things by different people. One person told me that the character should fear Luna. The other person said that they should not fear Luna
4246426 That makes sense. Thank you so much for the input!
You've already done the fear aspect, so I say ditch it.
4246540 Very true. Right now it seems to be that I'll head in the direction of not fearing. Thanx for the feedback