Coming Eventually: Chara and Absentia: A Match Made In A Very Special Hell · 2:59pm Sep 27th, 2016
Joker here. I've had yet another idea occur to me, this one I've been toying with for quite some time. It's an Undertale-Rainbow Factory crossover. The idea involves Chara Dreemurr (who'd be a boy in the story, because shipping.)
And Absentia/Scootaloo
COMBINE FORCES TO HUNT DOWN AND SLAUGHTER EVERYONE INVOLVED WITH THE RAINBOW FACTORY. And in the process, they fall for each other, having at long, long, long, long, long last met a kindred spirit in each other. In fact, it's Absentia who keeps Chara from wiping out the entire world outside the Rainbow Factory, although at first Chara doesn't really see the difference between the ponies of Equestria and the humans and/or monsters he's slaughtered in the past, considering what goes on in the Rainbow Factory. But, after meeting the CMC, the rest of the Mane 6, etc, he begins to think that maybe this new world wasn't totally evil. Maybe there's some good in it too.
Chara and Absentia's plan for Dash is simple: expose her for what she truly is, subject her to every horrible torture she's ever dealt out to others and then... end her.
I also have a great song for Absentia:
That is all.
(Does Papyrus's laugh in a sinister, evil way...) Nyeh heh heh heh... I love it.
I love Undertale, so this would be awesome to see. But I've searched up Absentia, and found nothing. Please explain to me what Absentia is. All I know is she is some version of Scootaloo.
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Absentia is Scootaloo's ghost (or something of that effect) after Rainbow Dash killed her in Rainbow Factory. I also have the perfect exchange between these two:
Absentia: You want to be my friend? I had a friend who was something like my sister once... it didn't work out.
Chara: I had a brother once. That didn't work out either.
Absentia:...then let's go catch a rainbow.
You like?
4231229 yeah, I do like the sound of it.
Hmmm, you sure have a lot of ideas relating to the Rainbow Factory, don't ya? Sadly though, the whole thing is beginning to creep me out (not your stories/ideas, the actual Rainbow Factory thing itself). Here's why:
1. Rainbow Dash is the main villain who kills everyone (Instant dislike).
<"Why? Why would you do that?"
2. Seems like the last few ideas of yours involve characters trying to kill Dash for her crimes (killing my favourite crime is a crime in its own way) Also, it somewhat kills Fluttershy too (Flutterdash).
3. I really can't imagine Rainbow Dash being like that. I mean, sure, she can be hot-headed/arrogant/cocky (etc...), but I don't think she's a bad person.
I guess what I'm trying to say is... is that I'm not exactly fond of these Creepypasta MLP stories (Especially Cupcakes - I couldn't even finish reading it. It was just too much.) Cupcakes & Rainbow Factory are possibly two of the sickest (disgusting/UNACCEPTABLE [as Lemongrab would say]) fanfics/Creepypasta stories that exist.
Of course, I still wish luck on your stories none-the-less. Even if Rainbow Factory isn't something I'm particularly fond of, I'm still interested and excited in reading them. You seem to have a really good imagination for these things.
Good luck, you'll need it!
Did you ever write this story? If not, can I write it?