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H3lios


"If you’re writing fiction, it’s a great idea to have a plot. It will coordinate your thoughts and add consistency to the text." -Lydia

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  • 213 weeks
    Slight delay but not for long.

    So I know I said the chapter would be out by the end of April but that was before... THE VIRUS. ***Dun dun duuuh* *Thunder crash***

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  • 220 weeks
    Next Chapter before April

    So a lot of you may be wondering where I've been. Well the answer is simple about a year and a half ago I discovered a Youtuber who convinced me to give the One Piece manga a try. I figured why not, it's a famous series and its fantasy adventure, sounds right up my ally. It shouldn't take me too long to get through it right?

    972 chapters and 20 years worth of content later...

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  • 244 weeks
    Not dead

    I know its been a long time since I posted an update for DSA, and I know I've said it before but the story is still alive. I really dont have a reason for the lack of updates other than not having more than 30 minutes at ta time to really write anything but now I can go back to writing during my lunch break and in the evenings like I use to so I should be able to finally finish that blasted

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  • 306 weeks
    Update and Name change

    An update on the next chapter. It's still in the rough draft stages but it's coming along so it wont be a year before it updates like last time. More importantly, I'm considering changing the name of the story itself to "The Dusk Shine Anomaly" since I kind of misunderstood what Anthology meant. I figured since each chapter was it's own little story arc like the episodes in the show that it

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  • 324 weeks
    It’s done!

    The new chapter is done, finally. Just needs some fine tuning for spelling, grammar, and idiotic plot holes and I can finally publish it. Look forward to reading it sometime this weekend.

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Sep
6th
2016

I've always wondered what stupid feels like. · 5:40pm Sep 6th, 2016

I have a confession to make. When planning this story I apparently didn't give the character designs as much consideration as I should. Particularly with the djinn and how I had initially described them as lighter, thinner but otherwise identical to terrans. Now that I'm actually writing, it dawned on me that the fact that you cant really tell them apart at a glace is a huge plot hole for this chapter. Now, I can easily fix this with a slight aesthetic adjustment. The cover art of the story shows Dusk with a small oval gemstone in his forehead. That could be the analog for horns in this universe and it wouldn't really change anything already written except for an extra line or two when it comes to their descriptions. (The magic would still come from their hands in other words, the gem would just be what draws the magic into their bodies.)

The reason I bring this up is because it's such an amateur mistake and I really don't want to just add it in and pretend it was there all along but never mentioned.

So, that's that. As for the progress of the chapter itself, it may be a little while because it's an important chapter, but it is being worked on regularly.

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