dC/dt Status Update · 2:17am Aug 29th, 2016
Next Chapter: In editting, has fluffy character goodness.
Next Next Chapter: In writing and unofficially titled 'That chapter where the world exploded with imagery'.
I don't mean exposition, and I don't mean fluffy character bits. I mean a couple pages of just that first good look at a Hive. It's absolutely wonderful, and I'm terrified I'm gonna have to scrap it for being needlessly wordy... But it's just so... Well, I guess you'll have to see it to understand. No use second guessing myself when no ones even seen it to say anything bad about it yet.
Well, I'm certainly looking forward to it already. I enjoy chapters like that. The only thing I'd ask for is that you use a very loose formatting, with many paragraph breaks. I find long, visual descriptions really easy to get lost in and difficult to read when they come in big blocks of text.
Sounds interesting.