Remastered chapter two coming soon. · 7:10pm Aug 10th, 2016
The fair warning to my readers to save the original work before I change it this Friday.
Going back through all of this, I really have a hard time figuring out how I let such exposition/telly writing go unchecked. I guess it goes to show that even when you think you're good at something, there is always something that can be improved upon. I really do want to extend thanks to so many other authors/friends I've come to know and helped me learn how to write better. I owe them a lot.
Cheers!