Update has been done · 3:42am Sep 11th, 2012
It took a little longer than I thought and possibly I've gone too far and will need to trim it down, or break it up into smaller chunks but the first chapter of Doorway has been completely redone. There are scenes that have been lifted from other chapters and the ending has been modified slightly.
Any constructive criticism would be appreciated and welcomed.
Cool.
<goes check updated>
FIFTEEN-THOUSAND WORDS!?!?!?!?
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Yeah. I know. Which is why I wonder if I went a little overboard trying to do the backfill on their relationship.
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I haven't gotten a chance to read it yet, but hey, I'm not complaining.
The new chapter is done?
It's 15K words long?
Crap.... Oh well. I didn't need to sleep tonight.
(*goes off to read chapter*)
Cool. Something to add to my ever growing pile of things to read.