Feedback - Another one-year. Time for more bester words · 7:26am Aug 8th, 2016
Wait.
You mean to tell me that title should say "better" as opposed to "more bester"?
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I really do live up to my self-proclaimed "eternally in-progress" title, because I don't think I get it right on the first try. Because it absolutely kills me to leave it in a not-perfect state.
Anyhow, it's been another year. A few months ago I wrote a blog post saying that Feedback was one year old. While that blog post was true, this blog post says the same thing about today and yet, in a way, it's even more true. Today, one year ago, Feedback was completed. Not published, completed.
In an odd way of commemorating, I decided to go through the entire story and improve the language. I mainly focused on eliminating pretty much all instances of that syndrome that is traditionally attributed to unicorns/alicorns of the lavender variety (to those that have left their criticisms here on this subject, you know of which I speak of 
), as well as taking care of some other issues here and there. Don't worry, it's the same exact story. It just reads a little better!
On an aside note, doing the editing pass was the easiest part; it was the importing it from google docs that gave me the most difficulty since the importer is f#&$ed right now.
I like "more bester," personally.
How time flies! I remember reading it not long after it was finished. Still the best fic I've read. I can't wait to see how the sequel ends up! Keep up the good work!