The story is dead, long live the re-write!

Chapter one of the re-write is ready to go. Crystalline is born anew, the writing is no longer that bad. Old readers and new readers may rejoice while the editor cowers from all the words to be edited. The quality is now that of Tomb Of Magic and there's all sorts of new things if you're new to the story or wanting to re-read it. I really hope you guys like it and read all the crazy sequels if you do. Be sure to comment and upvote all those things.

The old one's going down in about ten min. and then the new one will be up.

-Icy

EDIT: If you gave a green thumb to the original please do the same to the re-write.