Hearts of the Sky updates · 8:29pm Sep 9th, 2012
Chapter 4 is now online!!!
This chapter is so far the longest chapter in the story and it covers a personal tour of Ponyville to pass the time while Soarin waited for Rainbow Dash's return. (no Dashie in this chapter sadly)
May I ask for any feedback since I feel as if parts of that chapter were to rushed and/or wrong words were used so I ask if you guys could help me with improving the chapter then I'll be very grateful.
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(WARNING! SPOILER ALERT!)
As for future chapters, the love between Soarin and Rainbow Dash will slowly start in the events of chapters 5 and 6 and the loving relationship will develop as the story goes on. May I say now that it will not go to the extremes of mature content since I'm trying to keep the story at the "Everyone" rating.
Again, I thank you for your support on this story so far and I hope to give you more as time passes. (Even though I have College to go to during the week)
Please continue showing your support and helping me to improve.
