I'm back! · 9:23am Jul 22nd, 2016
Did you miss me? College is finally over and done with, I've sorted out my university application, and now I've got plenty of free time on my hands for the next couple of months. Naturally, this means that I've finally got time to resume work on Pinkie Personalities!
There's just one hitch: I'm kind of stuck on what the next chapter would focus on. I'd like to get some more interaction between the trio, Applejack, and Rarity, but I can't think of anything that they could do or say that isn't just rehashing stuff I've already written. Any ideas, guys?
The other option is that I head straight into the climax. This would probably need a chapter to set up, and then things would turn rather dark for a while. I have plans for this part...
Do you guys have any preference on what you want to see?
I can imagine a scene with Rarity meeting with Pink amenable and finding out about her crush leading to an explanation why she likes you know who.
As for AJ... maybe have her and Surprise do applebucking while the guards look on shocked at how fast Pinkie picks apples like in the episode Maid Pie... Or have AJ ask how pinkies family feel about the whole split personality these pass few years.
This. More interaction between the three and the rest of the Mane 6 is always good. We need to see how they react to this.
More interaction would be good I think. If things are going to turn dark for a while , it might be better to build the relationship between the characters more beforehand.
And , you know , to cheer us up before the incoming darkness *insert foreboding sound of thunder*
Anyway , glad to see you back and well !
(I will try to think about what would be an interesting topic for them to bond over...but no promises as I am dead tired right now...)
Hey, all I really wanna see is more content. I, for one, missed you like hell when you were gone, and can't wait to see more Pinkie Personalities.
Welcome back!
I agree that we should have more relationship chapters before getting to the nitty gritty. I hope that Pinkie will be okay.
1.- I'm glad to see you back.
2.- I think that building more relation bridges would be a good idea before the climax (but more than just "now we're friends", after that bridge is done, give us a "peace time" so the buildings get a better foundation for when the time strikes).
3.- I have no idea of how to help.
wonder how Pinkamina would get along with Luna? It might be interesting to introduce the "Pinkie Sisters" to the Princesses
I thin establishing the rapport with the other characters is very important. For me it is always important to get the characters generally most important to Pinkie such as Rainbow Dash and now lately Apple Jack (assuming that in this story they know they are "cousins" which I forget if they did in this story).
I think it might be cool to see A: Rarity trying to figure out Pinkamena's crush and B: seeing the rest of the apples and/or crusaders interacting with the 3 Pinkies. However, I'm glad you're back and I'm sure whatever you come up with will be amazing!
I do hope you'll be posting soon, you said you had plans for the climax and the rest of the story. If you need help, feel free to ask any of us, I'm sure we'd be more than willing to help.