ATTENTION EVERYONE! · 3:36am Jul 22nd, 2016
Dusk's final rewrite is now complete. Yep, hopefully this will be the last time I update this.
I now know exactly what the story needs and where it has to go. Now that I know that, Shine can move forward at last. But it cannot do so without your support.
Since I'm trying to get this on EQD eventually, I really need as much feedback as possible. I appreciate every comment and PM I get.
Thanks for your patience and enjoy.
Ok. Look forward to reading it, want to see it and see the story continue.
I hope the cafteria scene still happens or so, but if not it's cool can't wait to see what the rewrite is.
Can't wait man!