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Orfearus


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  • 541 weeks
    Back! Maybe?

    Well, I never did get my re-write of After So Long out. Ah well, was still fun to write and taught me a lot

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  • 607 weeks
    Yeah.... so,,,,,

    So I went.
    I left
    I was going to come back
    I tried to come back
    I couldn't
    And here I am.

    Searching for inspiration to write again.


    I have inspiration to finish After So Long...
    But I lack a present pre-reader and refuse to move along without said person.

    And now, due to my inability to find inspiration for more writing,
    I'm stuck.
    ...

    Well, first things first

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  • 612 weeks
    Applejack Appreciation Day!

    Ya'll know mah favorite pony is AJ.
    If you don't, you do now.

    And it's Applejack Appreciation Day!!!!!

    The challenge on EQD: Write a synopsis for an AJ episode on FiM
    Hard Mode: Write a summary

    CHALLENGE ACCEPTED

    Here it is: Family Ties
    Enjoy, it's not a full piece but just a synopsis and summery
    And if you like it, I might just make it a full piece!

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  • 616 weeks
    The Arts!

    Some of you might notice the new avatar
    Other more perceptive people the little link added to my bio
    And the rest of you might notice this blog post.

    After so long... 10 years of trying and failing
    10 long, hard years with nothing but broken dreams
    Hopes being ground to dust
    Rising up
    And falling down

    Until finally, the day has come

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  • 618 weeks
    Inspiration! For once I finish my edits

    First things first, the link to my massive inspiration

    Here

    AN ENTIRE MAP OF EQUESTRIA!!!!


    This makes me want to write a story from the San Palomino Desert to the Crystal Mountains.

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Sep
9th
2012

Applejack Appreciation Day! · 2:18am Sep 9th, 2012

Ya'll know mah favorite pony is AJ.
If you don't, you do now.

And it's Applejack Appreciation Day!!!!!

The challenge on EQD: Write a synopsis for an AJ episode on FiM
Hard Mode: Write a summary

CHALLENGE ACCEPTED

Here it is: Family Ties
Enjoy, it's not a full piece but just a synopsis and summery
And if you like it, I might just make it a full piece!
So vote in the comments to whether I should or not!

Synopsis: When a family emergency arises, Applejack is forced into the uncomfortable high class world to help a pony in need.

Summary:
It all starts on a normal morning. Applejack is cooking breakfast because... we don’t see enough of earth ponies doing stuff. Suddenly Applebloom rushes through the door, panting, holding a letter in her mouth. Applejack takes the letter and starts to read it, both Big Mac and Granny Smith gathered around her. The letter is from Uncle Orange, requesting their help in *gulp* Manehatten

*Opening Theme*

Applejack, Big Mac, and Applebloom are on a train headed to the big city. Big mac is quiet, as usual. Applebloom is talkative, as usual, randomly spouting on about possible city-related cutie marks she could earn. Applejack however, is short tempered at Applebloom’s over enthusiastic attitude. After snapping at her, she reveals the reason why: she is afraid of returning to the big city, because of how foreign it is to her. Her gaze returns to the window, Manehatten approaching in the distant sunset.

They arrive at Manehatten it is night, but the city is alive as ever. Both Applebloom and Big Mac are stunned, but AJ is much more easily able to adjust because of her past. She leads them to Uncle Orange’s house, only to find it empty. They start walking the street, asking for any possible information: however, they are all ignored due to their “uncivilized tongue.” Applejack tries again, and a brief flicker of memory of her childhood pops into her mind. After reverting back to her old Manehatten accent, she discovers that her uncle is at the city hall. While walking there, Applebloom asks why she didn’t do that in the first place; her only reply is because that’s not who she is.

They arrive at town hall and run up to Uncle Orange. Applejack falls back into her natural speaking voice to greet family, but is quickly told off by her uncle. He explains the situation: He’s been accused of being a liar by the most important ponies in town, the Royals, and if he cannot convince them of the truth than he might as well leave. Applejack gladly steps up to help defend the family honor.

She stands in front of the family of Royals, attesting to the honesty of her uncle. Despite having a flawless manehatten accent, she finds she is quickly losing the crowd. Her uncle starts to panic, for he has no-one else to turn to. Finally, Applejack throws off the false accent and visage she’s been presenting and talks to them in her rough country accent, delivering a much more charismatic speech about lying to herself and to others than would have been possible when talking in her fancy accent.

The crowd looks stunned, and Applejack feels she has done something wrong; However, she does not regret being true to herself. Father Royal approaches Applejack, and commends her on her bravery and loyalty to herself, and apologizes to Uncle Orange, for is he helped teach such an honest and upstanding mare, he must be just as honest himself.

After a brief trip through Manehatten again, during which AJ is true to her country accent and received much more warmly (for some magical reason that only exists in TV and Fanfiction) they part ways with Uncle Orange. On the train ride home, AJ dictates a letter to Princess Celestia about honesty, and how to be honest to others you must remain true to yourself.


FIN

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