Jul
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What Exactly Do You Want To See? · 4:30am Jul 17th, 2016
This is regarding What A Life: Sweetie Belle
Annnnnnnnnd regarding this: All Dem Votes Doh
21 and counting no doubt, all of them being a yes for a full story with Dai.
But my question to you is... if I did go through with this, what exactly do you want to see? Besides the obvious clop that'll be in it?
Or is that all you want to see? 
Regardless... please comment below with your thoughts on what you want to see in it, it'd help me if i were to write it out.
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#What A Life: Sweetie Belle
#Dai
#Clop Story Planning
#Maybe I'll Write It
#Bewbs
Do it for the plot... and I want to see his story dragged out into the light. As well as deflowering sweetie belle. I want Luna to get involved with his dreams and having it proved he's not some run away. Also, where in the seven hell's does he rest his head at night? If everyone thinks he's a runaway, why hasn't protective services not made an appearance. Make it loving, dirty but relatable and gritty.
And another thing, feel free to ad oc's to fill the gaps of other foals, town ponies, social workers. Saves time on making your own.
Someone said there would be tacos... Where are the tacos!?
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Duly note good sir. You make some good points~
His story, as in what he's done up until the point where he deflowers dear Sweetie? Or just everything in general.
Luna could do that, assuming she ever gets asked, hehe.
As for his sleeping situation, he's staying with Twilight.l
Loving, dirty but relatable and gritty... not sure how to do those last two.
I might, hehe, thanks man!
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They're in the dining car!
Serious talk with the crusaders of his old life(maybe even lying), his 'first' kill in Equestria, and bad secrets. :3
That's seriously all i got for now.
4097167 Bitchin'!
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Oooooh, hehehe, that sounds kinda funny, thanks!
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I want to see him bang the other crusaders!
Sweetie Belle insinuated it after all!
I would also love to see some Stealth Sex (for example, him coming over for homework, sitting at a table, while Sweetie sits in his lap/cock riding him, while Rarity walks in and coos at their cuteness not knowing the act of depravity they are committing!), and maybe even Sweetie Belle becoming more perverted over the course of the story. I wouldn't mind some sex toys like egg vibrators and normal vibrators too, even though it might get complicated to get them. Well, maybe Rarity has some stashed in her room?
Oh, and by the way, love the idea! I was soooooo blind before! I never even considered such a HiE fic! Heck, I didn't even THINK about using humans in my clopfic before! But this definitely gives me a whole lot of new ways for clop! Maybe one day I will even try to write a clop fic of a human-turned-well-endowed-zebra colt!
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hehehe. Perhaps there will be some sweet crusader funtimes~ 
That is true, she did
Stealth Sex... oooooh, that sounds fun, hahaha, you got a good idea!
perhaps I can work with these quite a bit ;D
Really? I didn't think it was that good of an idea :sweetieunsure: just an idea I had was all, hence my tag line.
I write what other people won't~
This alone is grounds for a sequel, then we'll take it slow and add more fillies or mares into the mix, as word travels through the grapevine over a course of years.
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and that is true, hehehe
OOoooo, good idea~
one of the main six really dont care who but at the end sweetie bell must walk in this would make me laugh
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4103892 agreed sadly that happened to a friend of mine in real life he never was quite the same since and i think finally getting to him being 16 and walking in on mom and pop well you dddoooonnn'tt want to hear the story and if u do i at least have respect and restraint no matter how much adult huemor is in it. he's 21 one now and obsessed with clop now no matter age, race, species, or dimension.
what id like is sweetie to become a watcher and maybe earn a cutie mark in it
and one morething i hate under age clop please answer a higher standard i view you as a talented writer and my view on those who write that kind of clop well hate is an understatement but that clop does exist please dont stoop to their low standards and sickening ambitions
have here walk in and give here a well studied knowledge of clop and have whoever she walks in on (rarity) in a state of shock as she sits and says dont mind me ----------- you decide what the rest will be said make it funny
4121273 well my idea was less "see mom and pop bang" but more "walking in on your boyfriend having sex with your sister" and that can have many Wacky and sexy outcomes
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You say you hate it, yet you're giving me an idea as to what you want to see... this confuses me greatly.
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Like, Sweetie Belle walking in on Dai banging someone else?
4122122 no sweetie walking in dai banging rarity
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Well, what I said was true to some degree, but hehehe, I read ya.
i said i hate under age clop to me clop is clop except when it involves children under 18 then it just hanise and wrong sick and twisted
in my opinion clop that has any children under 18 to be rape willing or not;; The friend i spoke of earlier is now in a group that fights hanise crimes like rape and child pornography
the reason for my earlier comments was because i didn't know the story was already done. when i read it well others might be satisfied but i for one even with a filthy mind myself hate stories like this any other so long as the age set is proper clop fics are just physical love stories
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Also, I'd avoid Sweetie Belle Finds a Thing, that is also underage clop.
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Well I wouldn't hold out hope on you reading the sequel to this story then, cause I do fully intend on writing it.
As of the polls, there's close to 100 people that want to see more of this oh so delicious clop I write... I'm very good at Foalcon it seems
And writing is writing man, there's no crimes being broken here, and nothing bad. Sure, its gross in some eyes, but I'm not doing anything bad
heheh
if u wish to know how dirty and scared my mind is i once had a hellish nightmare where where my friends were raped roasted alive and eaten in front of me if you want to dig deeper i had a night terror about my entire family being raped torched on a cross and as i walked down the rows of my massacred family some had their eyes pulled out and nailed to there hands some had their guts spewing from their mouths and i not going into any further details because i'm trying to forget and let the memory fade right i don't think this is going away any time soon. so i've been living with this for almost four years now my therapist says that i should talk to others about it well i've gotten better but it still haunts me
4122999 that kind of clop is more curiosity killed the cat and doesn't bather me as much
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What a lucious dream, sounds like a good story
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yea but im still a bit tormented by it besides the nightmare scape isn't something i enjoy delving