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Citrine Star


School life is filled with way too many exams and assessments at the moment... I swear it's a shared objective jest among the teachers to "Study the student bodies's BRAINS out!" :P... :D!

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  • 408 weeks
    Art 'n' Stuff 5

    In my previous post, one of my sketches was a fusion between Rarity and Twilight Sparkle (inspired by the concept of Steven Universe). I really loved her :yay:! It seemed wrong not to create a digital version - here is 'Lavish Charm' :pinkiesmile:.

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  • 408 weeks
    Art 'n' Stuff 4

    Couple of doodles and scetches :yay:. What do you think?

    A fusion between Twilight Sparkle and Rarity :pinkiesmile:

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Art 'n' Stuff 2 · 2:24pm Jul 9th, 2016

Rainbow's are dashing arn't they :pinkiesmile:?
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I suck at puns :applecry:!

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Comments ( 8 )

Its good to see another fellow artist posting stuff on fimfiction, especially one as talented as you!

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Thank you so much - I honestly didn't know I was good :pinkiegasp:!

Fellow huh:rainbowhuh:? So what do you draw:raritystarry:?

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I've just been posting occasional bits of art on my blog [link] just like you have.

I'm hoping to get a series going at some point in the future, though!

fair piece, body structure looks healthy sized. i have two suggestions: first, do some work on improving the muzzle, you got a good design you just need to improve on some of the smaller details like the lips and adding nostrils. second, do wings that would resemble more like bird wings than the wings that you see in the show.

note these are more or less my preferences but im always happy on trying to help to improve a fellow's hand in drawing.

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You have a point with the wings, but I think muzzles look best when they are very simplistic. It helps their face appear more human and thus more relatable and expressive!

another very clean sketch that turned out great. keep it up, next step would be shading maybe? or you could try your hand at feathers. foal steps are best after all.

p.s previous commentor was right about the wings, bird-like would make for a more beautiful design, that said- you did a wonderful job replicating the shows initial look.

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Thank you for the feed back, I shall attempt this "bird wings" design though the muzzle part is just my art style and the particular way I prefer it :twilightsmile:.

4081605 it's good to have your own style. some people who have a good eye can tell the artist based on the artists unique quirks and style. i look forward to your next piece.

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