Remake · 4:11am Sep 6th, 2011
I'm going to be re-working these first five chapters based on feedback given by readers so far. If you want to be heard, please comment and let me know what you're thinking, because I am taking feedback seriously.
I'm also still going to be typing on future chapters, at least enough to keep up with PonyWriMo, but as of now I'm well ahead so that shouldn't eat at the editing time too much.