Happy times. Sort of. · 7:59pm Sep 4th, 2012
Okay, I want to start off by saying thank you to all of the people who read, liked, favorited, and commented on Fantasia. Although 100 views may not be a lot for most people, it means so much to me. And for that, I sincerely thank you. It's made me happy that my first story was accepted so positively! I love writing. I really do. It's all my creative ideas bunched into a few thousands of words and it's awesome that that's been received positively so far. The criticism has been nice and I haven't had any "OMG THIS STORY SUCCKKKSSS" type of comments yet. I seriously can't thank you guys enough for that.
HOWEVER!
As you may or may no know, the living hell known as school has started once again. I almost didn't write the story because I knew this would be an issue. Given it was still Summer, I could probably have a chapter out every 1 or 2 days. But now that school has begun its torture once again, updates will be MUCH less common. I'm sorry, but that's just how it works. I don't know how often I'll update, hopefully at least once a week, but I can't be sure how terrible my new teachers will be in the aspect of homework. Although I will try my best to get a chapter out every now and then. Truly sorry.
So uh... Have some Fluttershy.
I am surprised nobody still commented on this. I guess I am faster than your watchers.
Anyways, I will read it today. But, not now. That torture school has started and I can update my story like once a week as well.
And, trust me. We're not alone with this problem.
By the way, I will give you some positive critique as well. And, I have liked and favorited it.
Since, it has 20 likes as well. That is an awesome start for your first story. Better than mine.
I don't need to understand why you wrote your first fiction as not FlutterDash. Trust me. My first story is not FlutterDash as well.
As much as I was afraid to screw it up. I wrote something else. But, that's enough about me.
And, if you need help with proof-reading and other stuff in future like ideas. Let me know. I will help you whenever I can.
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If I were to write FlutterDash, it'd probably be a cutesie wootsie d'aww inducing fic, but I don't think that's where my strengths are. Although I do want to try it at some point. As for the lack of updates since release, it's because of a couple of reasons. Of course, there's school. School sucks, homework sucks, school related stuff sucks. Yeah, I think you get it. There's times where I can't think of anything, times I don't feel like writing, and time where I'd rather be playing Borderlands 2 or something. 
I do want to write the next chapter, and I have some ideas, I just need time to do it. It sounds much simpler than it is, but I'll get it done in time. As for the proofreader thing, I don't think I really want one to be honest. 
If I did, you'd be one of the first people I would ask. But please, if you spot any grammar/spelling errors, feel free to point them out in the comments as well.
Thanks for the feedback! Looking forward to the critique, as I still think the first chapter is awful.
EDIT: Whoops, wrong account. Too late now,
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Yeah, school sucks and so does homework. And, I do feel like playing a game or something as well. Like Black Mesa Source or something. I am a bit of a gamer as well.
But, whenever you need a proof-reader let me know. And, thanks for accepting my offer for proof-read. It helps me as well.
By the way, I am gonna read your story now. After some few minutes. You will find my comment on it.
Wish you luck on your writing and I am sure you will get better soon!