The Bubbly Mare updated! · 8:42pm May 18th, 2016
Updated The Bubbly Mare with two chapters -- "Up in the Clouds" and "Mother's Love".
This is where the stuff gets real. After running into some drama Derpy wants to tell Thunderlane that everything's going to be okay, but how does she go about doing that and what're the end results?
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Without spoiling too much this is a set of chapters that gave me a lot of trouble, especially "Up in the Clouds". It took about five months of reading, re-reading, editing, and writing two different drafts for that chapter to get it to this point... it's one of the few chapters I had in mind when I first started with this story.
"Mother's Love" to a lesser extend gave me a few issues as well. I almost published ""Up in the Clouds" by itself, but decided to hold off. Glad I held off, as I'm kinda partial to publishing the two at a time.
Anywho, Hope you guys enjoy it as much as I enjoyed bringing it to ya.
Peace