Unfortunately, I don't really have time for that now that college has started, so this will just be a straight >greentext conversion to prose paragraphs. I'll get to improving it one day, however, if enough people mention it.
Howevah! I shall be changing a few minor things, so it should flow a lot easier than the >greentext version did. Just as soon as it gets approved by mods...
Oooo. Can't wait for the added detail.
Try to give more build up to the romance, it seemed a bit rushed.
Oh my, you've met with a terrible fate, haven't you?
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Unfortunately, I don't really have time for that now that college has started, so this will just be a straight >greentext conversion to prose paragraphs.
I'll get to improving it one day, however, if enough people mention it.
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Dohoho~
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Eh, oh well.
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Howevah! I shall be changing a few minor things, so it should flow a lot easier than the >greentext version did. Just as soon as it gets approved by mods...