A Little Editing · 4:09am Jan 26th, 2012
As this is still a work in progress, I've gone back over the chapters and have done some basic editing, mainly to the areas involving character speech. Some errors may still remain, and the wording could be changed later to provide a more coherent story flow.
Once the story if finished I will go back over and do a final editing makeover before clicking the story as "Complete".
That is all for now.