• Member Since 8th Aug, 2015
  • offline last seen 2 hours ago

Bergen


More Blog Posts36

  • 114 weeks
    Chapter 63 Finished!

    As the title suggests Chapter 63: One Down, Five to Go is finished and will be released tomorrow. I would like to apologize for how long it had since the last two chapters. This chapter taking longer to write than the last two chapters combined. So again my apologies. I won't go into the details as to why it took so long here, I'll leave that for the footnotes of the most recent chapter, but to

    Read More

    0 comments · 178 views
  • 124 weeks
    Chapter 62 Finished! A new short-story in the works!

    As the title suggests Chapter 62: When All Paths Converged is finished and will be released tomorrow. I hoped to have the chapter finished by the end of the year. But I just wasn't able to finish it off in time. However, I guess you can now take this as a special gift for the new year. Happy Early 2022!

    Read More

    0 comments · 184 views
  • 129 weeks
    I'm Back! Tale of the Second Alpha is back on. For now.

    Really, I never left, I just stopped writing. Both because due to my job cutting into my time, even during Covid I still worked, and me simply no longer being interested in writing the story following what caused me to leave the fandom in the first place. Something which I won't go into here. I still don't consider myself a brony anymore, I stopped watching the show the Season 7 premiere and

    Read More

    3 comments · 228 views
  • 316 weeks
    (Outdated!) Tale of the Second Alpha Canceled (I'm NOT Back!)

    I have officially canceled Tale of the Second Alpha. This decision was a difficult one to make, but I believe it was one that needed to be made.

    Read More

    0 comments · 498 views
  • 322 weeks
    (Outdated!) I'm No Longer Apart Of This Community! All Stories On Hiatus Until Further Notice!

    Due to all of the bullshit that has come out about Toon Kritic (If you are not aware of his open pedophile I have made an ever blog post detailing it and my very angry opinions on the matter) and the open laziness from the entire community to do nothing more than sweep all of this bullshit under the rug and move on as if nothing had happen, and then being angry when the public continues to rip

    Read More

    0 comments · 520 views
Apr
2nd
2016

The Gift for Maud Pie Review by the HeroofBergen (Spoilers) · 6:23pm Apr 2nd, 2016

The first 'normal' episode of Season 6 and it was good. The tone of it was what I had expected for the first 'normal' episode. No storyline where Equestria is in the possibility to being destroyed. No, it was a Slice of Life episode with Rarity and Pinkie Pie going to Manehatten with Pinkie's sister Maud. This the third straight season that there had been an episode based in the city of Manehatten, along with straight season with an episode that has Maud in a major capacity. Both the city and the character introduced in Season 4.

Now to the episode itself. The episode was entertaining, the pace was rather slow, but I believe it works to its advantage. Pinkie Pie and Rarity go to Manehatten for different reasons. Pinkie to share a special tradition with her sister, and Rarity to setup a new store in the city. After the success of her store in Canterlot (continuity!) I do watch Silver Quill, in case you are wondering. While the topic of Rarity's new store is introduced, it is not the mane focus. But it isn't completely forgotten, with it being returned to on multiple occasions. With the episode ending with Rarity getting her new store.

I wouldn't say that there one stand out character throughout the entire episode, being that each character has time to show their best. Rarity in the beginning, by helping Pinkie find the best gift for her sister. Pinkie in the middle, by giving up her iconic Party Cannon to an asshole (it's not cursing I am referring to a real ass) of a 'sales pony' for a rock punch for Maud. A moment that made verbally gasp. Maud in the end by 'threatening' the pony that took the cannon into returning it to Pinkie, with a little help from Rarity.

Credit goes to the two newest writers of the show. All of the character present were in character and were able to grow from this experience. Rarity was great. Her being able to play off of the insanity of Pinkie Pie, and the complete opposite with Maud. Maud quickly being able to rival her sister as my favorite earth pony. Rarity being the best of Mane Six, outside of Pinkie, to have scenes with Maud.

If I were to criticize the episode I would say that some of the dialog was very exposition heavy and could have been done better. Some of Rarity's lines also didn't make me believe that she was a business mare that had just started a store in the city that all famous ponies want to have an expansion in. But that being said the dialog in question was so bad that it was either unintentionally funny or directing to the plot and moral of the episode. Which being was a little cliche, that gift isn't about how great it is, but of how much love is it. Which is pretty much every Christmas movie ever made. It is still a great moral that was handled every well.

Overall, I thought this was a great episode that made laugh, feel, and sit back and enjoy. Season 6 looks to being going in the right direction. My final rating for this episode is a good 7.5 stars out of 10. I am the HeroofBergen signing off until the next episode.

Comments ( 0 )
Login or register to comment