Made a story

I uploaded my story today. The prologue and Chapter 1. Even if they're not viewable yet, it still makes me uncomfortable putting them up this early. But it's the only way I can easily get help from pre-readers.
I'm not sure when I'm finally gonna feel okay making them public. I need it to be much better than it is right now first, that's for sure. My writing style is still too inconsistant and lacking in detail.

But with this first post I can find out just how long it ends up taking me to be happy with my work. That's the real point of this blog.