Hello everyone, VelvetNight here! I see my story isn't getting good feedback lately, so I want to know, what are your suggestions on how to make it better? I also have a little bit of writers block, so I'm open for suggestions on how the story goes!
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Hello everyone! VelvetNight here, with an update on my short story! I am currently working on chapter 2, titled 'The Plan'. It would be wonderful if some of you could advertise it! 
Also, I would like to know if any of you would like to be my editor. I'm a quick typer, and don't always see mistakes or typos. Thank you!
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Hey guys! I've been thinking of writing a story, but I need some help, anyone out there willing to give me ideas? mature ideas too
Hello everyone, VelvetNight here! I see my story isn't getting good feedback lately, so I want to know, what are your suggestions on how to make it better? I also have a little bit of writers block, so I'm open for suggestions on how the story goes!
VelvetNight, signing off
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My suggestion is to make it not flow as quickly. Go more into detail on things happening and make everything almost feel like it paints a picture in your head. I personally take some inspiration in my writing style from J.R.R. Tolkien, and it shows quite a bit in Dream Come True