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Jacoboby1


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  • 250 weeks
    All Stories Canceled

    Hello everyone, I apologize for not being as active on this sight anymore as I was long ago. But I figured by the title a lot of panicked comments are already being formed but please read the entire post before making those comments as I will address the most obvious questions at the end.

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  • 387 weeks
    Hey I'm alive!

    I suppose an explanation is in order of what the hell has been going on with me. Well, to be frank college didn't work out and I ended up moving down south with my family. The hectic nature of moving to a new place has put a damper on my writing and made it difficult to motivate myself to write. So I kept putting off writing as I've tried to get my real life in order. I can't say it's completely

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  • 442 weeks
    Any artists out there?!

    I figure after going several months, Equestria Guardians and some of my stories could use cover art. I can't pay for them because, college, but I will credit any artist who provides cover art. Please, either contact me on PM or tell your friends who can draw about an oppurtunity. I really want to help get Guardians up there.

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  • 465 weeks
    I'm not dead fellas!

    Gosh, I never thought I'd actually get to say that, guess I can cross that off my internet bucket list. Anyways, here's what's going on guys, I've been sick, out of school and just depressed for so long I've honestly lost interest in writing all together. My confidence was totally shot for the longest time. So, I gave you guys a huge hiatus that nobody asked for. For that I truly apologize and

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    9 comments · 1,097 views
  • 478 weeks
    Future Side Stories to think on.

    Hey guys, with another case done I feel like we can look forward to the future. Honestly though, the biggest thing for new ideas I'm looking for are side stories. I have a handful in mind though, so check it out.

    Welcome to Ponyville.

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Aug
25th
2012

Constructive Criticism · 7:05pm Aug 25th, 2012

So yeah here's the deal guys. I'm at college right now and I'm just starting to get settled in. Expect new stories sometime soon, but that's not what I'm going to be focusing on.
Mostly I'd like you guys to leave comments about my stories overall. Essentially give me constructive criticism about my writing style or what I'm doing right as far as my stories are concerned. I'd love to hear you guy's opinions so please post.

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Comments ( 7 )

Fine! I will post angry comments from now on! Grrrr! :flutterrage::flutterrage:

Sorry if that startled you...:fluttershysad:

311173I'll admit that took me a little by surprise...:rainbowhuh:

311174 Well you wanted constructive criticism, I'll build the praise up and then...
DROP THE BASS:flutterrage:
DESTROY YOU WITH HAAAAAAAAAAAATEEE

311175Well when you put it that way :twilightsmile: thanks for the "constructive" criticism

311178 You're most welcome :)
When is case 6 coming out approx?

311197I'd say next week once can find the time

311200 Cool, good look with college, take your time make friends and remember dont do
DROP THE BASS
You will FAIL.

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