The "Real" Chapter 2 · 2:36am Jan 25th, 2012
The real Chapter 2 is now up, as the old Chapter 2 is now called Chapter 1, and the old Chapter 1 is now called Prologue.
Make sense? I hope so.
I got one really bad star rating from someone, but they didn't leave a comment as to why. Seriously people, if you have a problem with a story you need to tell the author. We're a My Little Pony community, and as such we should be encouraging writers to improve, rather than a simple "rate it and leave it" attitude.
Other than that, the story has received mostly praise on my website and Facebook. It would be nice to see some more actual star ratings and comments, but that's wishful thinking for now.
Hopefully the rest of you enjoy the story. If you feel more tags should be used (I know Chapter 2 delves into a bit of comedy...), then please leave a comment.
Enjoy!