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sunnypack


Although it left it, it knew that it was right, it made it down, because it didn't know what's up.

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  • 218 weeks
    You were the Chosen One!

    Alas, it was not so.

    So as many of you may have surmised, I have violently but silently passed away.

    That is to say I am dead.

    Not in the literal sense, but possibly in the literary sense.

    To make things short, I had a bit of a breakdown, a couple of other mundane life-things and a lack of time to even consider writing.

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    12 comments · 1,212 views
  • 285 weeks
    Microstory X - Awkward Twilight

    It happened at a bookstore.

    "Hello," said the clerk.

    "Morning," Twilight mumbled back.

    The clerk returned a strained smile back and then went back to work.

    Twilight then realised in her half-tired state that it wasn't morning, it was the evening, the store was closed and it wasn't a bookstore, and the clerk wasn't there and she had been talking to a cardboard sign all this time.

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    3 comments · 557 views
  • 285 weeks
    Microstory IX - The Existence

    Before Twilight could say anything, Pinkie held up her hoof.

    "Twilight, stop, before you say anything. I have to say something!"

    Silence followed.

    "What were you going to say?"

    "...I forgot."

    "Pinkie... what are you doing on my doorstep?"

    "Twilight, you have to help me with my application!"

    "What's this?" She held the documents up. "These look like job... rejections?"

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    5 comments · 484 views
  • 315 weeks
    Micro Story VIII - The Rock

    It started with a slight clicking sound.

    Like the fingernails tapping on a tabletop.

    Click. Click. Click.

    There it sat on her desk.

    The rock.

    Eyes fixated on the inanimate object, Twilight examined it with such rigour.

    But it stood still.

    Yet still was that sound.

    Click. Click. Click.

    Then a different sound.

    Crack.

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    7 comments · 565 views
  • 330 weeks
    Micro Story VII

    Twilight glanced out the windows at the dim backdrop of stars.

    Night time, she thought, and lazily went back to reading.

    Then she returned back to the window.

    No wait, that's space!

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    1 comments · 592 views
Feb
27th
2016

True Epilogue · 1:23pm Feb 27th, 2016

Well here it is, I hope you get the notification. This is the more 'complete' version of the current epilogue. This is a feeler to see if this wraps it up enough to call it an ending.

I apologise to anyone who's read my rant. I realise it must come off as peevish and immature. Sorry, I'm very sensitive to criticism, which works well because I take it seriously, but it comes as a double-edged sword that means I take things quite hard. Still, I'll try to improve and make sure I can rise above that and take into account your thoughtful comments. You all have a desire to read the best and you certainly want the best of a story, which I am happy to oblige.

I must say that flip-flopping is not something I like to do, but it's hard for me and anyone to admit they made a mistake. I had well-intentions to leave the story at that point, but hey, that worked to its detriment rather than in its favour. Obviously, I should be always looking forward to putting the highest quality content possible, and not sacrifice any of it based on petty pride.

Thanks again, and make sure you let me know if this ending still doesn't satisfy you. I will endeavour to make sure that it eventually does. If not in this fic, then definitely in something I make in the future.

As always, my honourable readers, thanks for reading!

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Comments ( 7 )

I for one found the original ending enjoyable-- at least my interpretation wouldn't be wrong. Who else did?

What story is this for?

3780187 Tagged in the post: Twilight's Twilight.

Much more satisfying ending. Still open ended but with some form of closure at least.

3780560 It's not showing up as tagged for me. Same might be happening with nospeedy. Is it a glitch?

3782397 Possibly, I will file a report if the next story I tag doesn't show up. It shows up as tagged for me. Thanks for letting me know!

3782502 Of course. I'll keep an eye out as well.

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