Slight delay, but a ray of hope... · 6:43pm Aug 24th, 2012
Okay, guys. I'm sorry, but chapter eight will be delayed a few days. I've run into a bit of writers block. I'm pushing through it, but it won't be ready for posting on Monday. It'll be done, but I won't have had anyone pre-read or edit it.
SO, with that in mind, I'm looking for someone to become a full-time pre-reader for me. I'd prefer some kind of official background, but anyone who can point out awkward phrasing or plot holes will do. My usual guys, Golden Vision and Guesswork, are both dealing with personal stuff, and can't help me at the moment. The threads at /fic/ all have massive queues, so it would take way too long to get someone with talent to help. I'm confident in my writing abilities, but not to the point where I would post something without having at least one person get eyes on. So, if you think you could help, please reply here or PM me. Thanks.
NOW!!! Time for your weekly metal fix. Ever look at the title of my story and wonder, "What the hell does that have to do with ponies?" Well, here is the song that gave me the title:
Under A Luminous Sky, by Communic. They are a European progressive metal band, and dear, sweet buttery Jebus do they kick ass. Very riff driven, very atmospheric and epic. This song come from their album Waves of Visual Decay. This is easily one of my favorite prog albums, and I highly recommend it if you like that kind of thing. Also, cool points to whomever can guess specifically what line in the song inspired the title of my story. If you can, it might give you a small hint as to where this story is going...
So, yeah. Chapter eight will be finished by Sunday, and should be up hopefully by the middle of next week, depending on when I can get an editor. Again, if you think you can help, please let me know. Till next time, stay safe, stay free, and stay metal!
Jake The Army Guy out!
I would help, but I couldn't correct much more than basic grammar, regretfully. As for the line that inspired the title, I'm guessing "They kill, for the sake of killing, to reach a new, and better reality," as it seems to be what our killer is doing.