an editor and word

Well I am now cursing all my high school english teachers now as I ride away in the back of a grammer police car(not a commentary on the people who pointed out my misstakes). So it seems before I can take another step with my story I'll have to find an editor and buy word.

Comments

[Capulus]

I'd be willing to help with editing.

[Darkheretic]

308312 sorry its taken me so long to reply but the crual taskmaster known as guild wars 2 has been cracking the whip alot over the past week lol. as to your offer I would love to have you help with the editing but first I need to figure out what I want to do with my story. L(oh and cool new avatar)

[Capulus]

327996 Firstly: Thanks. I love this picture of Pinkie. Secondly: If you want, PM me and bounce your ideas off of me. I can give you my opinion, if you want.

[Darkheretic]

328710 strange looking pinkie lol

[Capulus]

368316 Hehe... Octavia is my favourite background pony now.

[Darkheretic]

369012 so pinkie for your foreground fav and tavi for your background huh?

[Capulus]

369093 Nah, I just love that Picture of Pinkie. Applejack is my favourite Mane Six.

[Darkheretic]

369095 AJ hmmm

[Capulus]

369123 Eeyup. For me:

Mane six favourite: Applejack.
Secondary character: Luna.
Antagonist: Chrysalis.
Background: Octavia.

[Darkheretic]

369145 rarity for my fav mane six, luna for my secondary, discord for my villianish pick and doctor hooves for my background pick (the discorded one if possible)

[Capulus]

369178 Hehe, at least we agree on Luna.

[Darkheretic]

369190 she bribes me with moon pies