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The unicorn sat with his little filly by the fireplace and opened the book once more. "Let's see what happens next!"

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  • 23 weeks
    Black Feather Project Update

    The last month has been pretty crazy. My dog got a massive bladder infection and I had to spend $2000 on vet bills to get an ultrasound and all the nonsense that goes with that, all to get a prescription for $30 worth of medicine to fix the situation. Been kinda busy with that as well as upcoming holiday planning, etc.

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  • 26 weeks
    One more rewritten chapter

    Hey everyone.

    Well, that last chapter took 3 weeks of hard work, mostly design, but nobody has commented on it so I can't tell how anyone feels about the story so far. I'm hoping people can share their thoughts because it helps me to know how the story is being received.

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    5 comments · 139 views
  • 29 weeks
    Some great design work

    Greetings, Black Feather fans!

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    3 comments · 143 views
  • 31 weeks
    More new characters

    I've recently finished a scene where Dinky gets to know one of the platoon members. I find Dinky's POV to be fascinating to write, though all the Dinky POV scenes will be brand new content (for you old fans out there) because Dinky wasn't previously written into this part of the story. She's a fun character to see the world through. Innocent and naïve, happily venturing into things that

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  • 33 weeks
    Sergeant A.Pone

    Alright, it's time for a shift of tone.

    I had a pretty long chat with Duvet yesterday, and we decided that chapter eleven really does need a thorough rework from the 2018 version. This is the last of what I'd call my "weak writing". Chapters 12-21 are pretty much perfect, so if I can fix 11, this is going to mean great things for the story.

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Feb
1st
2016

Chapter 08 - True, True Friends · 4:13am Feb 1st, 2016

What's this?? Two chapters in three days? What is going on?

Truth is, I've had True, True Friends pretty much done for ages, but it's been less than a month since I decided to take half the content from The Keen Sense of Urgency and move it into its own chapter called Magical Ministry Tour, which will be chapter 9. So it all turned out really well with not posting chapter 7, because if I had, I would have confused the hell out of everyone when I did rip all that content out and move it forward two days in the timeline.

So, where are we at now? This is a very special chapter, as it focuses heavily on characters and relationships. The plot moves forward nicely with Nyx going through her recovery and the deepening mystery of what happened to the missing doctor and the zebra camp. Lots of heartwarming moments here as so many of the characters have their lives further revealed.

This is also a very long chapter, at 11,600 words. Chapter nine will be long as well, at roughly 10,400. After that, I'm going to try to keep chapters shorter going forward. So now with chapter 8 posted, the full story length has risen to 76,000 words! :pinkiehappy:

This also wraps up act two of act one, if I may call it that. This is a three-act story overall, and act one itself is split into four acts of four chapters each. The first was everything from chapter one through chapter four where they were just about to head into the wilderness. In those four chapters, Nyx and her friends were dealing with more "home based" issues, and changes in and around Ponyville. Then, the mission was underway and the adventure unfolds. The new location in the bayou with its backwater settlements and terrifying mystery were revealed. This chapter wraps that all up, and by the end, you'll know that it's time to move on to a new phase of the story.

I'm very excited to be drafting new chapters again, and the overall development momentum is definitely picking up. I hope you really enjoy reading True, True Friends. :twilightsmile:

As always, links:
Chapter 08 - True, True Friends
Complete chapter index
Public Nightmare Nyx forum (ask all your questions here)

And an up-to-date word count:


Also, for any newcomers who may wonder why these chapters aren't being published on fimfiction at this time...
That's all explained in this blog post.

These are drafts. The story is in heavy development and my hope is to draft the whole thing before I resume publishing. On this site, publishing a chapter puts a story on the front page of fimfiction and attracts lots of new fans. I don't want to frustrate more people than necessary by making them wait for the whole story to be written. The plan (hopefully) is to draft up the whole thing and then do a tour-de-force publishing marathon with a chapter being released every week until it's finished. There's simply no way to do that while so many of the story's key elements are being developed.

But I had already built a fan base when I started publishing (too early). So, what do?

I fretted over this problem for a while until I came up with the solution of the forum where existing fans can keep up with the story as it's being written. And now that I've polished up the first two-thirds of act one, I'm diving forward into the final third and fans should be seeing some new content and news coming out regularly. I'd really like to get act one written quickly before taking a break from drafting and planning out act two. Much of it is already worked out, but not its structure. Act three is actually more developed, as I have the story's climax already detailed (but not drafted).

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