Updated! Twilight Sparkle and the Cake Thief

Chapter 5 - Muffins and Mysteries!

In which everyone's favorite Mare of Muffins becomes a viewpoint character. I honestly loved writing Muffins for this. She's bubbly, happy, and a little silly. I had a harder time writing Twilight in this. She's in between her enthusiastic about everything related to learning phase and where we see her in the show, monofocusing on a single task, and it's a little hard to try and find a balance that I feel works for her.

But, I think I pulled it off. Next update, the Sparkle Family and Muffins, Mare of Mystery!