Well, that was short... (Equestriatale) · 3:29am Dec 13th, 2015
After realizing what kind of fandom I was going up against when making Undertale, I realized I wasn't nearly a good enough author to even think about making a story like that. People have standards, and came onto this site to meet them, not break them. I'll be removing the story from existence simply because I don't want a story in my library to clog up space.
Is this simple-minded. Yes, I'll be the first to say that. But it's the only logic I have to go by. Besides, I need to stay focused for Final Fantasy MLP Chapter 21, right?
If there are any of you out there who wish to stop me from deleting it, well, no one is stopping you.
Special awesome thank you to Damien Darkside for opening my eyes to what I was going up against. He's a really cool guy and he makes some pretty bitchin' stories! Please go and support him and his stories! And for god's sake, if any of you attack him because of the choice I made MYSELF, you're gonna have a bad time.
Here is the comment he made to help me.
The reasons would be as follows (not my own opinion but gives you some answers):
1) It is a crossover. People think if you do a crossover that means yoy have no originality.
2) Second person. I do second person all the time and I get shit for it. Ignore these people but it will get you dislikes.
3) Undertale. People really, really like Undertale and will not like your story because it goes against lore by adding ponies n such.
4) Undertale. Yes I wrote it twice because of the other side of the coin. People consider games like Undertale and Five Nights At Freddies to be "Cancer". They will dislike just out of spite and the fact that it takes one second and one click to damage a story.
5) Bandwagon. There have been a recent influx of Undertale stories in here and some people will dislike without reading because they think you want to bank in on the popularity. Kind of like the X Masturbates wave that just sped on by or the "Whould you care if I was a Changeling" stories that were popular.
Those are the 5 things you have going against you by writing a 2nd person Undertale story with ponies. If you were a more well-known author your fanbase would probably balance out the ratio but unfortunately you aren't (and this isn't an insult).
Not a bad story though tbh, it is just reality.
Again, thank you, Damien. Well, I'm out. See you when Chapter 21 comes out!
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okay.
*Skeletons with standards
Jokes aside, sorry mate. :(
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Actually, I've decided on simply removing my story, writing up a few more chapters and then re-submitting it later to see if that changes anyone's minds. Until then, I'll just be here in my bedroom, wasting my life away. 
It's fine, it's fine.
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Also, be sure to leave a like as well just to help get this situation all sorted out.
I wouldn't do this. But hey its your story. I think if you don't want it let someone continue it. better than letting it die
I don't think it's that people have standards. I believe it's more 95% of the fandom for Undertale are assholes who if you say you don't care about the game get angry, swear at you, and try to shove the game down your throat.