The last chapter, 'Trouble on Hearth's Warming Eve" was butchered before I had a chance to read over it myself. The offender has been removed from my google doc page and the unfinished chapter taken down. I'm truly sorry if the chapter displeased any of you.
what? this was a good chapter! I saw nothing bad about it!
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There was about a thousand or so more words detailing more imagery and also another event that got pulled.