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Thought Prism


Founder of Thought Prism Games. Check out my work at thoughtprismgames.com!

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  • 4 weeks
    Another Rising Flames Progress Update

    It'll probably be another two weeks before chapter four is ready, give or take. It's needed far more editing than any chapter so far, and also more than any chapter to follow, most likely. Actually, this single chapter has probably undergone more revisions than any other piece of fiction I've ever worked on. I went overboard on the original version due to my desire for drama, which led to drama

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  • 14 weeks
    Rising Flames Progress Update

    Just letting everybody know, it's going to be a bit longer before Chapter Three drops. In addition to refining our editing process to be more collaborative (I was letting my mindset from my game development work bleed into here, when my priorities with Rising Flames are very different), Spell Check and applezombi pointed out a bunch of issues with my outline that I've been diligently

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  • 17 weeks
    My new company: Thought Prism Games!

    I’ve got an exciting announcement today! Some of you might have been wondering what I’ve been up to outside the fanfic front, and now I’m ready to share at last. I am proud to announce and launch my new card game company: Though Prism Games! I have two fresh releases: Carddrop, a nifty little dexterity game to enjoy with regular playing cards, and Veebar, a fun two-player experience for all ages.

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  • 24 weeks
    Rising Flames Release Date!

    1/1/2024

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  • 31 weeks
    Free Giveaway of my book!

    Since it’s been over a year since release, and I don’t think anybody else is going to buy it at this point, I’ve decided to release my original fantasy novel from last year for free! You can read it right in dropbox here, or download the file. It’s an EPUB, so it’ll

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Nov
28th
2015

Starlight Glimmer's Incredibly Stupid Backstory · 9:44pm Nov 28th, 2015

Spoilers, obviously. Read my rant after the break, if you've seen the finale.



Ok, so what the hell. Starlight's motivation for her numerous heinous deeds was revealed, and it's super pathetic. She just straight-up overreacted to an easily resolved problem. The appropriate response to the event of 'my friend is moving away because they got accepted to boarding school' would be to congratulate them on their success and agree to keep in touch through the mail, not to immediately denounce friendship entirely and become a literal soul-sucking communist. It took me like five minutes to come up with a much better backstory that explains her villainous nature much better, without even going into stuff too dark for the show:

Starlight Glimmer was born into a noble unicorn family along with her older brother Silver Shine. One day, Silver got his cutie mark, but much to their parents' dismay, it was for his talent as a waiter in the foodservice industry. In anger and disappointment, they disowned their son. Starlight loved her brother, and begged her parents to reconsider, but they refused and scolded her for questioning their judgment. It was then that Starlight realized how awful cutie marks were, and she pledged then-and-there to create a society where everypony was equal and she could reunite with her brother without being subject to social stigma.

In this case, her scheme in the finale would be motivated purely by revenge. This would still allow for Starlight's reformation, but Twilight would have to go about it differently. She could say something like:

"I'm so, so sorry that happened to you, but that's no reason to erase all cutie marks! A cutie mark expresses a pony's individuality; it's what makes them unique! You loved your brother because he was special to you, would you really take that special happiness away from everypony? Just because your family wasn't caring enough doesn't mean everypony is against you! Just make some friends! Friends are like a family you can choose, and they're there to support you when you need it, even when the whole world seems against you!"

And BAM, she realizes how stupid she was being and the story's ending is the same. Except not nearly as poorly conceived.

#endrant

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