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DarkStarWolf53


I am an aspiring novelist/poet who writes high fantasy/action/adventure novels/fanfics and pretty poetry.

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  • 403 weeks
    Quitting FIMFiction

    I no longer have any interest in writing MLP fanfics, so I'm quitting this site and unpublishing my work.

    I still watch some of the episodes (mainly the darker/more action packed episodes), and I love the comics, even more than the show. But I don't have interest in writing fanfics any more.

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  • 418 weeks
    Still on semi-hiatus, but...

    The other night, I got a really good idea for some scenes to add to my KoA fanfic, so I'm going to unpublish the chapters that I plan to work on, and will re-publish them when the edits are done. Currently I'm focusing on making my "Trouble's Waking" and "Bounty Hunter" chapters a bit more dramatic, as well as exploring some of Goldfeather's backstory in those chapters.

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  • 435 weeks
    Going on another hiatus

    I'm going on hiatus from FIMfiction again- I'm in college now, and am also working on a trilogy of proper novels rather than fanfics. So I might be on hiatus for a few years. Sorry for the inconvenience.

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  • 437 weeks
    Re-re-editing Kingdom of Avia UPDATED

    So the EQD rejection letter for KoA said the following:

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  • 438 weeks
    Got rejected by EQD- which I find oddly amusing

    So I submitted Kingdom of Avia and later Bad Luck for a Bad Manager to EQD- got rejected, and they actually gave a legit reason this time! (Though I suspect they didn't read beyond the first chapter for both stories).

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Nov
28th
2015

Season Finale thoughts (possible spoilers) · 9:30pm Nov 28th, 2015

Welp, that was dark. And SO MUCH ACTION!! LOVED it!


A legit WAR against Sombra and Chrysalis! A duel with Nightmare Moon! Discord cameo (though Discord seemed more annoying than actually dangerous). Tirek cameo (wish that had been longer- see if he actually successfully drained all magic, and that would make for a REALLY dark scene!) Cameos of those jerks Flim and Flam as robber barons! A legit post apocalyptic Equestria! Ponies in camouflage (and was that a reference to Braveheart?)! RD with a missing wing! Sweet Apple Acres as a factory! Multiple murder attempts! AWESOME tribe leader Zecora! (And was she actually killed on-screen by Chrysalis..? I need to rewatch that scene...) Magical laser unicorn duel! Also, Starlight Glimmer is right up there with the Kingdom of Avia version of the Unholy Triad (Discord, Sombra, and Chrysalis) of NASTY villains now! And this S5 finale is right up there with the finale with Tirek for "awesomely-dark'!

The only thing I didn't like was Starlight's reformation. I'd rather she'd stayed evil since she seemed to really be a sociopath. Or if they had to reform her, it should have been much harder.

Heh, if this finale is anything to go by, my story Kingdom of Avia could almost fit in canon if Starlight's time altering spell hadn't been broken. And now I want to figure out a way to fit S5-finale Starlight Glimmer in the AviaVerse.

That might be hard though, because most of the AviaVerse characters don't even have cutie marks...

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I agree they should have spared more time for Tirek. Twilight having to dodge him while returning to the map would have made an epic chase scene. It would have only taken 2min 3 tops.

I just wish that Starlight could have gone back to the present more once, and refused to accept the truth. Also is it wrong to wish that something worse, than her 1 friend moving away? Lame....

3575738 For the first thing: I definitely agree with you!

For your question, I agree with that too. I wish they'd gone another, darker route than just "I lost my friend so now I'm going to become a sociopath".

3575757 Yeah, I thought of how to fix that, Starlight could have then moved forward into the past and then shown her younger-self as being rejected by her foalhood friend later that day, or even right after she goes to see him after she gets her own cutie mark. He could reject her personally. That would make her have a real reason to hate cutie marks, even her own.

3577722 Exactly! And that would have taken, what, 1 or 2 minutes? Pity they couldn't add that.

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