Update #4 · 6:54am Jan 21st, 2012
I've been super-uber busy lately and have had little time to progress the story. Just letting you know, Rainbow Dash is one of the main characters in the story, it's just that chapter two does not show that. Chapter 3 should, and will. Again, I apologize for delays.
Also, I might pump out a new work sometime next month. It might be a one-pager, it might have chapters as long as "Breakfast is Served," won't know 'till I go along with one out of many ideas for stories that pop into my head.
Thank you to everyone who's tracked, favorited, and rated the story. It means a lot to me since it's not the best story on FimFiction!