Still Working!

Hey to anyone reading my series 'Meanwhile...' I'm still working on getting this right, It's hard to do. I want it to be worth reading, not some poorly thought-out/written story. I also don't want to add a bunch of pointless fluff, so if I make a point about something you can be sure it'll be used later on. Well, with the exception of world building to some degree. Anyways, I'm just getting to the tricky part in my current chapter that is hard to make believable, but I know it is possible with the set-up I have. I just have to nail the characters good enough and it'll be a great set-up for what's to come next.

As for my story 'In The Distant Past' I'm putting that on hold until I'm at least done with this first arc of 'Meanwhile...' and I almost am yet so far b/c like I said earlier I want to get it right. I got some plans for 'In The Distant Past' that I think make for a good story.

Also if anyone wants to help me speed up the process of making these chapters I welcome all who would go over my work and give me constructive criticism. Anything from grammar, which I certainly need, making the characters sound more in character, to describing things better would be appreciated. Just let me know and I'll send you what I'm working on and you can give me your thoughts and/or edits.