sequel to my first story

Hey guys, Jamie here just wanted to let you know there is a sequel inbound any day so just look for a story called Equestria's new hope. It is based 19 years later. I have changed somethings though my grammar for one and it is a new couple are looking after skywalker, but twilight and kaiber will train him throughout the sequel and sequels after that...

Anyways I hope you'll enjoy it and if you don't attempt to put your criticism in a nice way because I get kinda upset/angry to unnecessarily harsh comments. So just give me hint's on what to edit not a massive paragraph on one thing but if you want to review it properly pm me.