Updated "The Bubbly Mare"

Two new chapters added:

"Closeness" and "New Sprouts".

These are two chapters I was looking forward to writing, though I'll admit I had trouble with the later of the two. That's not liable to get as much attention though, heh

Jokes aside, there was a lot of info I wanted to put into that chapter with very little dialogue and I remember from the writing classes I took, oh... almost a lifetime ago, it's easy to overwhelm or bore the audience with too much detail and at the same time not cover enough. Took a bit of editing, but I think I'm happy with it.

The story itself is getting kind of a mixed reaction, which I expected. On the one hand, it's been getting some constructive criticism and people are telling me they're really excited to see another chapter, which is cool. On the other hand it's got a number of downvotes but not a whole lot of explanations as to why that is. I dig that people are going to downvote because of content, because it's not what they expected, or even downvote for the sake of downvoting, so I'm just kind of shrugging my shoulders over it.

Anywho, hope everyone is doing well. Peace